Positive: Great looking charaters. Anticipation and follow thru are very good. Expression and exaggeration are on the mark.
Nit-picking: Around frame 58, Shot 8, Henel's hands sink into the table, & around frame 300, Shot 9, Gretel's hair bows make some strange flicking. Their head movements look too mechanical, both moving at the same slow speed. Shot 11, the narrator says "starving is their frequent friend", but that is not translated well.
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