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Here's a suggestion for plusing his pose. Put him in a more aggressive stance, slightly crouched and forward leaning...

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I'm with robert.... If you can, make the pose a little more "dynamic".....with a little less "Twinning"... Off balance as if he's moving in an action. Think that would enhance it bunches. I like your character...Nice work..

  • Hash Fellow
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Bend the torso forward a bit, move him forward more over his right foot. Get more of a 3/4 view so he's not directly facing the camera.

  • Admin
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Sweet looking character. Very cool.

 

Since others are making suggestions I'll throw my hat in the ring.

He's got a pretty blank expression on his face.

Is he enjoying this? If he is then perhaps a really big smile on his face.

A mad face would work too but I'm a little more hesitant to suggest that for the contest. Still if the following question can be answered in the affirmative... Do you want to scare all the kiddies every time A:M starts up? Hehe... a can see a bunch of kids opening/closing/reopening A:M to see him again. "Did I just see his face change?" :)

 

Who ever sees your image will spend quite a bit of time looking at his face.

  • Admin
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It's great to see him moving!

He's starting to live and breathe.

 

In the walk cycle, if you can move the hips up and down a little more that will add another layer of weight to him.

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Que onda Luis , como estas?

Oye Felicidades por tu modelo , esta muy chingon, de verdad que da gusto ver tu desarrollo en el 3D.

 

Me gustaría sigerirte dos cosillas que podrian mejorar un poco tu screen shot:

 

1. Seria bueno agregarle mayor expresion a la cara, tal vez una sonrisa convinada con una expresion en ojos como de anojo, darle una expresion de "Confianza y mayor poder", me parece que actualmente no tiene expresion en su cara.

 

2. En el pie derecho (el que tiene levantado), se veria muy bien si le dieras un dobles a la punta del pie, para que se vea que esta apoyado y es flexible.

 

En fin , son solo algunas opiniones, guato saludarte y Mucha Suerte¡¡¡ :lol:

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Que onda Luis , como estas?

Oye Felicidades por tu modelo , esta muy chingon, de verdad que da gusto ver tu desarrollo en el 3D.

 

Me gustaría sigerirte dos cosillas que podrian mejorar un poco tu screen shot:

 

1. Seria bueno agregarle mayor expresion a la cara, tal vez una sonrisa convinada con una expresion en ojos como de anojo, darle una expresion de "Confianza y mayor poder", me parece que actualmente no tiene expresion en su cara.

 

2. En el pie derecho (el que tiene levantado), se veria muy bien si le dieras un dobles a la punta del pie, para que se vea que esta apoyado y es flexible.

 

En fin , son solo algunas opiniones, guato saludarte y Mucha Suerte¡¡¡ :lol:

 

gracias por los comentarios , me gustaria hacer los cambios que me piden pero e tenido poco tiempo

tu sabes , el LEGENDARIO abarca casi todo mi tiempo , por sierto seguimos en ese proyecto , que no se si algundia vera la luz

pero bueno la esperanza muere al ultimo , gracias de todas formas lo tomare en cuenta para futuros desarollos.

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