robcat2075

It's an interesting environ. The camera move looks way "too smooth". Maybe music will help. The camera doesn't always seem to be banking in relation to it's turn. Right now the environment is all the same. Is it possible these root things could gradually change in appearance as we get closer to the hole? Darker, lighter... more moss... itchy scalp particles? A lot of your audience will need a reason to keep watching if they all look the same. I remember a "making of" thing on one of the Indiana Jones movies. When they were animating the 1st person POV of the coalcart ride through the coal mine they found that is was way more effective for the camera to anticipate turns than to always point straight ahead on the cart. You don't have a cart here to provide visual cues, but turning the camera more might be something to look into. But I'm eager to see where this is all going!

I like these projects that people do with their children. Lucky kids! Maybe some quarter the animation contest theme should be "Honey, I composited the kids"

I especially like the wrinkly knees. Those help to make it look less CG. I like the whole design of the character, but I don't like the way the face is coming out in the renders. it ends up looking too complicated, because of the way the shade line is so broken. How about good ole' flat toon shading for the face (no gradient)?

Just a general thing... it needs some "keep alive" motion during the "holds" to avoid that frozen-rock-solid look some parts get. But there's some very good stuff going on here!

You're right. I guess as a minimum, the lightning bolts were the wrong symbol. Quick band-aid fix: Thanks, Zack. I may have to cave-in and give him eyelids, too.

This is a "get well" image I made this evening. I was never satisfied with the pose. He's supposed to have a migraine. Any suggestions are welcome.

I like the bodies. How about tapering the legs so they are thinner near the top? This would be stronger "design-wise" , more flexible in animation, and reduce the visual conflict of them not being actually attached to the body.

Since it's an igloo, maybe the walls should be more bluish to suggest ice and snow? What's that on the right? A tree trunk in an igloo? A lava flow?

Darn, I missed the print deadline! Oh, well... How about if her head was on his shoulder? and nudge her torso out a tad. That would get us closer to the () arrangement. Not that that is gold or anything, but I think there might be too many parallel elements right now. Another idea: how about changing the frame from landscape orientation to "portrait". It's vertical composition, a vertical frame would strengthen it.

Looks very cool! the color map and bump map are related, right? Too bad we can't render materials like that once, then "bake" the result on as bitmap textures... that would speed things up, wouldn't it?

I agree, it's a fine looking image. But I haven't seen any yellow pages printing that will do it justice. "Logos" are rarely photorealistic because they need to survive almost any printing process and expecially need to survive conversion to B&W. Color yellow page ads are expensive, too. Successful logos also tend to be very simple in design. I can't think of a successful one that isn't. If you really need a logo, I'd go with something more "design" and less "photo." You seem to have the art skills to do that, this might be the basis for developing something more graphic.

That looks promising! I don't do any facial stuff yet, so I don't have much advice. One thing I notice is that a feature (like an eyebrow) will sometimes travel to a new pose and stay absolutely motionless there, which appears odd. But I think that is something you'd refine out as you made more passes at it. A lot of that wouldn't even be noticed if this were a full body shot with "acting" and all that.

Its a nice shot!. How about moving the tall candle to the left or right so we can see the flame against the dark sky rather than the white window frame?

I think more R&D is needed. While they are more intimate in the new pose, the humanoid appearance isn't reading well. Perhaps something with two curves drawn together like two parentheses: )( or maybe () It's a tough problem. But I know you can do it.

It looks good, but I must be missing something in the Cog tutorial because when i move a shoulder up high like that the rib area comes way, way out to the side, even on the finished sample.

Yeah, it sure does seem to be bouncing fast, but I don't have tennis ball here to test. Maybe you based this on a video example? If you're going for VERY realistic, a tennis ball wouldn't elongate on the way down, however... Richard William's "Animator's Survival Kit" book has a spot where he talks about this very exercise and how you can "cheat" reality for a better effect. Great book.

Cute shot! If he zig-zagged instead of coming straight down , we'd get a better view of his pedaling action. Is he on a path constraint of a surface constraint?

Thanks for watching and making comments! Well, my hope was that he would appear to be listening during the pauses, then reacting to what he heard. But if it just looks like arbitrary poses strung together then that wasn't successful. You're right. The one thing I changed between the contest version and this post was to make him glance at the phone, but that was a bad idea. Indifference was better. Don't they say "If you blink, you lose"? The file was too small... or too big? Working toward my diploma from the "Make'em See It In The Back Row" school of acting.

Well, if you're just looking for "problems" here's what strikes me initially... -When he drops an arm down to his side, it seems to jump into place rather than ease in. -The transistion from shot 1 to shot 2 is an awkward jump cut because he's suddenly changes the phase of the walk cycle he's in (from "left foot forward" to "right foot forward") and because the change in camera view is too slight. -Likewise from shot 2 to shot 3 in the position of the right arm doesn't match up. These are things live-action filmakers go mad getting to match up because they really have to capture each shot separately and make them fit in editing. But for animation we can more easily do this as one performance in one chor with multiple cameras and get perfect "cuts". I think doing this in 3 chors is over-engineering it. -I don't see any action/reaction between the masses of the arms and the body, particularly when he tosses the object. The result is a rather stiff appearance to the action. My hand is small compared to my body but when I swing it out my body is still nudged in the opposite direction, and my body comes back when I swing my arm back in. His hands are huge in comparison to his body. The whole piece is really about the arms it seems, so you want to make them great. -many of the head motions have a linear quality to them, making for a jerky effect. There's also an odd jump right at the beginning of shot 2. -A head that huge would benefit from some anticipations on the big moves. That would take experimenting, it might mean a completely different performance for the head. This would be a difficult character to animate because the proportions are so extreme. The limbs are so short in comparison to the hands/feet that "successive breaking of joints" is going to be tough to fit in there, but that would be another thing to implement if you're going for broke on this shot. (I realize this is a character you were assigned). But I think this will be an effective sequence. I do miss the part about the loofa sponge, however.

From the four-hour Animation Showdown, my finest achievement in grotesque overacting so far: Fated Phone Call! (QT 217K) bonus animation: Dig (QT 85K) See if you can tell where my four hours ran out. Suggestions are welcome.

Is there any way to do that in plain-vanilla HTML?I'm not an HTML guru but I suppose the HTML work-around would be to display the icons in one HTML frame and have clicking on one load the related info into a nearby frame. DHTML, java or javascript would probably come closer to the behavior i was thinking of, but there are compatibilty problems across browsers. Flash is really the way to do stuff like that now. It's great for graphic interfaces. Everyone and their dog has the plug-in already. But then what would I put for "Star Wars 1.5"; "Officially Sued by Lucasfilm"? "Really Nice!" - Mom

That's a lot of great content on your site. Content is king, they say. My complaints : The text notes on each film don't seem visually connected with their picture. I think center justifying them is what's doing it. They're sort of saying "I'm by myself, pay no attention to the picture tagging along onthe left." Also the fact that all the text is the same size (the title is no bigger than the date of the film, for instance) prevents the eye from easily distinguishing one film's info from another. And to do varying text sizes, you'd have to ditch the Courier font. Courier is rather retro, but not in a good way. I think you should go with some san serif font that works with the one you've used for "Featured Films". Just from a web standpoint, I'd wanna redesign the page so that no scrolling is needed. Aside from the enabled scroll bar on the right of my browser window, there was nothing to make me think the page had anything below "Duck Sauce" on it. My first thought is to design an interface that just shows the pictures, and when they roll over the picture the pertinent info for that film is displayed in some comon area on the page. Clicking on the picture would take us to the actual film. There are lots of different visual metaphors that could embody that concept. Each film could be a position on an old-fashioned TV channel knob. The info could come up on something that looked like a "TV Guide" listing. I'm sure there are even cornier ideas than that. Whatever, the idea is to get the whole design visible in one window. Yes, web users know how to scroll, but don't make them scroll if you don't have to. Your films are so good, we don't want any of them to get missed. BTW, "Duck Sauce" is an "Official Selection, Portland Indy Animation Festival". Put that between two laurel leaves in the "awards" spot. Disclaimer: These opinions are coming from a guy who for two years did all his Flash work in gray tones, just to see if anyone would complain.

Thanks Yves! Are there any schemes on the horizon for shortening the render times for this sort of stuff? Also, it sure would be neat if we could do one render of a scene and bake the results onto the patches. I realize that wouldn't do for scenes with objects moving around inside them, but architectural fly-throughs could use it ok. Or is that something we can already do?

How about a sprite that looks like a solid particle instead of a fuzzy one? You might model and render a tiny crumpled cube and use that image as the sprite.

Thanks, Yves. I'm having some trouble with the spreadsheet, however. It opens up ok, but when I put new values in the white boxes, the "Suggested Sampling area" result always shows "#NAME?" which means excel "doesn't recognize text in a formula." The cell contains this formula... =MROUND(SQRT(D8/PI())*100,50) I'm on Excel 2000, which doesn't have MROUND listed as a function. If I subsitute ROUND the result will produce numbers again. Is that an appropriate substitution or is MROUND something completely different? thanks,