TheSpleen Posted August 8, 2009 Share Posted August 8, 2009 A+++ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted August 9, 2009 Hash Fellow Share Posted August 9, 2009 Thanks guys. that's promising. The spray off his dorsal fin is too straight-line. I tried to make it less straight, but all my attempts failed. I could make them less streaked looking, which would make them look less in a straight-line. they are too long, but I was thinking more of how they look like they are shooting all parallel to each other rather than falling in a parabola kind of path. I'd try animating that whale in an arc out of the water into his final position, emitting drops from his skin all along the way. the animation doesn't have to be great because you're just going to render the last frame. But that would be the way to get the drops to take their right place. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted August 9, 2009 Author Share Posted August 9, 2009 Thanks for the idea Robert, but that doesn't work fo what I was trying to do. I was using motion blur to give the sprites the streaked look, the whale also blurred if animated. Here's the render with motion blur turned off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted August 9, 2009 Author Share Posted August 9, 2009 Here's a minor update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve392 Posted August 9, 2009 Share Posted August 9, 2009 The water coming off the finns look good to me ,prety realistic I reckon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
largento Posted August 9, 2009 Share Posted August 9, 2009 The water spray certainly adds a great deal to it! Now it really *feels* cold! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edlundart Posted August 12, 2009 Share Posted August 12, 2009 Looks great, and it's really fun to see your tweaks along the way. I would just lose the drops around the fin of the one on the left. He looks more passive to me, and the drops in the air seem unrealistically suspended. I also wonder if the white horizontal lines where they're breaking the surface is too white -- it looks a bit like it was drawn on in post without accounting for the lighting in the scene. Which I guess is kind of how sprites work, although I don't really know because I've only ever used them once, in a limited way... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted August 19, 2009 Author Share Posted August 19, 2009 Thanks. I haven't had much time to work on this. Here's a hires render with very minor tweaks. I still haven't found a solution to the spray yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NancyGormezano Posted August 19, 2009 Share Posted August 19, 2009 Very nice stuff! with a very nice mood...I love the overcast look & I can hear the silence, except for the water, and faint whale moans and groans... I still haven't found a solution to the spray yet. Ummmm....dare I say: Photoshop? That is, if you're not looking for an animatable/dynamic solution, nor a static image purist's solution? It's the resultant image that counts - not how you got there, from the viewer's perspective. If you are going for static image, A:M solution only - have you tried decaling photo of foam/spray (or some noise pattern) onto a shape/grid, messing with surface & decal properties (color, transparency, spec, reflection, roughness), positioning & deforming the spray "object/grid" in the chor, based on camera ? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted August 19, 2009 Author Share Posted August 19, 2009 Thanks Nancy. I wouldn't know where to start in painting something in a paint program. In fact, I wouldn't know how to paint something for a decal. So my options are limited with my skills. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pixelplucker Posted August 20, 2009 Share Posted August 20, 2009 Can get some nice effects in Dogwaffle, I dabble in it just a bit and is pretty cool. http://www.thebest3d.com/dogwaffle/free/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted August 21, 2009 Author Share Posted August 21, 2009 Did some more work on the orca model. Attached the flippers and added the mouth, next is the teeth and tongue. The patch count is pretty low (290), too low in fact, but it will have to do for now. [EDIT] rendered with new perspective. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NancyGormezano Posted August 21, 2009 Share Posted August 21, 2009 Oooo..eeeee-uuuuuu eek eeeek eeekk (translation: Pretty! in whale speak) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbenefi33 Posted August 23, 2009 Share Posted August 23, 2009 Hello awome work on the wales you ought to send that to the discovery channel to the whale wars steve irwin ship. OH yah I set the pic as background and that a awsome job you did. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steve392 Posted August 23, 2009 Share Posted August 23, 2009 Looking real good Mark ,well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nino banano Posted August 30, 2009 Share Posted August 30, 2009 I like the sea effect and the composite as well, very well done mark Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted August 31, 2009 Author Share Posted August 31, 2009 Thanks, I haven't had much time to work on this. I have added the teeth and tongue and textured the inside of the mouth, but I'm not very happy with it yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwhitaker Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 Mark, I love this, the cool grays give the right feeling to the beautiful Orcas. well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted August 31, 2009 Author Share Posted August 31, 2009 Thanks Katt. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaryin Posted August 31, 2009 Share Posted August 31, 2009 He looks happy . I think it's looking aweome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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