arkaos Posted March 12, 2007 Share Posted March 12, 2007 Well, well, well, well. It has been close to an eon now since my last W.I.P. Hopefully some of you might remember me, lol. I have not spent a lot of time with A:M lately because I've been concentrating most of my efforts in story development. I have finally reached the pre-production phase of modeling my characters. This character is a semi-human, mostly human looking, character from an unknown race (unknown as far as the story goes). I would like some feedback on my face model and any pointers/improvement I could make to my technigue. So far I have the base facial mesh going. I'm still trying to tweak the patches around to try to bring out the character. I've been spending a lot of time this year poly-modelling for work related stuff, so my splinemanship is a little rusty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenH Posted March 12, 2007 Share Posted March 12, 2007 A good start. He seems abit face forward at the moment. When ever that happens to me, I select the side of the face and rotate it round the side abit. There may be one or two too many spline loops round the mouth. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_black_mage Posted March 12, 2007 Share Posted March 12, 2007 thicker hair,to many bald spots....but make sure you do that with HAIR OFF or your computer will be as slow as a snail stuck to a piece of gum Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tido Posted March 12, 2007 Share Posted March 12, 2007 It is strange how there is ONLY hair for his pinch and top of head. We should see shaved beard (very short hair) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jon Posted March 13, 2007 Share Posted March 13, 2007 face forward = asian. ' ' ) that's not necessarily a bad thing. how realistic are you working for? my first impression is that you could loose half of those splines, and perhaps his eyes are too close together. overall, a great wip! -jon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted March 13, 2007 Author Share Posted March 13, 2007 Thanks for the comments, everyone. They all gave me something to think about. This version incorporated some of your comments. The face is not quite as forward facing as it was. I eliminated a spline loop around the mouth and over the nose and reconnected some splines. I worked a bit more on shaping the facial features. I made the lips more full and emasculated the jaw line a bit (I think). And of course, I regroomed his hair. I haven't done any work on the eyes and eyebrows are coming soon to a W.I.P. near you. how realistic are you working for? my first impression is that you could loose half of those splines, and perhaps his eyes are too close together. I am going for a fairly realistic face structure, but not so much that outrageous expressions look out of place. One huge thing I notice is that his eyes appear too wide from the frontal views. Maybe I should change that. What are your thoughts on what I need done there? Eyes have always been a weak point for me. Thanks for the comments so far, they have been very useful. Keep 'em coming. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_black_mage Posted March 13, 2007 Share Posted March 13, 2007 It is strange how there is ONLY hair for his pinch and top of head. We should see shaved beard (very short hair) maybe a 5 o'clock shadow decal... EDIT: speaking of the goatee shouldn't there be hair on the bottom of the chin too, rather than just janging from the front? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted March 13, 2007 Author Share Posted March 13, 2007 It is strange how there is ONLY hair for his pinch and top of head. We should see shaved beard (very short hair) maybe a 5 o'clock shadow decal... EDIT: speaking of the goatee shouldn't there be hair on the bottom of the chin too, rather than just janging from the front? No way, dude....he uses Gilette - The Best a Man Can Get....lol Yeah, there should. There will be before he is done, I can assure you. (I hope) Last time I tried a 5 o'clock shadow, it looked like he had mud on his face, though. Gotta keep trying. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
largento Posted March 13, 2007 Share Posted March 13, 2007 Cool character! If he's an alien, I think you can make up your own proportions for the eyes. But if you're not wanting that, the normal human face is 5 eyes wide. So there's an eye's width between the two eyes and an eye's width between the outside of the face and the eyes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted March 13, 2007 Author Share Posted March 13, 2007 Cool character! If he's an alien, I think you can make up your own proportions for the eyes. But if you're not wanting that, the normal human face is 5 eyes wide. So there's an eye's width between the two eyes and an eye's width between the outside of the face and the eyes. Thanks, largento. Actually, I should have seen that to begin with after how many times I've read about that proportion in tuts (D'OH). Yeah, the front view really shows it...eyes WAY too big. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaryin Posted March 13, 2007 Share Posted March 13, 2007 From the front view I think the jaw should be slightly bigger than the neck. I also agree about the eyes. Good job so far. Keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted March 13, 2007 Author Share Posted March 13, 2007 Update: 1) Made eye a more realistic size. 2) ditched the hair. I didn't like it. The update is back to what my orignal design was before I started this wip. Now he's starting to look like the character in my head. I still have to do eyebrows, but I am lacking experience there. My first several attempts looked pretty bad. If anyone can give me some pointers on that, I'd really appreciate it. You people have been very helpful, I thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trajcedrv Posted March 13, 2007 Share Posted March 13, 2007 Cool lookin' guy... I like the eyes the way they are, but I feel that there is something missing about the lips... now they feel as slit in his face... you'll need more definition (and lips - i - ness ( ;o) ))... reference needed (and probably one good look in the mirror wouldn't hurt a bit) keep us posted... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_black_mage Posted March 13, 2007 Share Posted March 13, 2007 Last time I tried a 5 o'clock shadow, it looked like he had mud on his face, though. Gotta keep trying. change the decal settings to "diffuse" and that will only darken the color of the skin... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted March 20, 2007 Author Share Posted March 20, 2007 Well, I've been working on the body a bit. I don't have much muscle definition on the arms, legs and abdomen yet. I still have a bunch of tweaking to do, but the base mesh is getting there. Oh yeah. Obviously the hands and feet aren't done yet. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
totlover Posted March 21, 2007 Share Posted March 21, 2007 very smooth mesh... good job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted March 23, 2007 Author Share Posted March 23, 2007 I finally finished the modelling on the main body "YEAH". Next weekend (when I can afford Painter) I will texture this bad boy. In the mean time, I will model the sparse clothing for his first scene and put on some fingernails / toenails. I really can't wait to rig him and make him spring to life. spin01.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted August 3, 2007 Author Share Posted August 3, 2007 Well, after a brief vacation from A:M I decided to at least give this guy something to wear. Here is a test render I did last Sat. night. I havent really gotten all the texturing done, but in this shot it doesn't really matter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeeAnderson Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 Cool lighting, I like the new clothes too! Any chance we could the new duds more clearly? Lee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted August 3, 2007 Author Share Posted August 3, 2007 Hey there, thanx for the comment Here is a pic with the keylight set back to normal and without the volumetric effect on the rim. As I said, I haven't textured the clothing and armor at all, just slapped on some surface attributes. The basic coloring scheme I think I will use, though. Since I got the new A:M Paint this spring, I think I will use that to get the texturing done. I DO have a copy of ZBrush 3 I've been using for my lightwave models, but I'm kinda limited for time (working 70 hr + weeks at my day job) so I think I will just stick with A:M Paint for now. Some quick test stuff I've done using it really impressed me (and was easy and fast). Hopefully I can get a final textured model sometime soon. Since my work schedule has been so busy, I've just been creating short re-usable actions and other short snippets of my animation instead of texturing. Spin.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuba X Posted August 4, 2007 Share Posted August 4, 2007 Hey there, thanx for the comment Here is a pic with the keylight set back to normal and without the volumetric effect on the rim. As I said, I haven't textured the clothing and armor at all, just slapped on some surface attributes. The basic coloring scheme I think I will use, though. Since I got the new A:M Paint this spring, I think I will use that to get the texturing done. I DO have a copy of ZBrush 3 I've been using for my lightwave models, but I'm kinda limited for time (working 70 hr + weeks at my day job) so I think I will just stick with A:M Paint for now. Some quick test stuff I've done using it really impressed me (and was easy and fast). Hopefully I can get a final textured model sometime soon. Since my work schedule has been so busy, I've just been creating short re-usable actions and other short snippets of my animation instead of texturing. Man that Amazing Progress from begining to end! Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted August 10, 2007 Author Share Posted August 10, 2007 Hello All! Attached is a quick animation test I did this morning. In this scene, my character is undergoing an emotional crisis which triggers an unexpected phenomenon (not shown wait for the final). I just wanted some feedback on the primary motion and timing of this shot. Note: secondary animation not keyframed, yet (fingers, facial expressions, etc.) Enjoy Action02_test.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted August 16, 2007 Author Share Posted August 16, 2007 Here is another shot of the same scene with a little added. C & C welcome The going has been slow, but now that I'm not working 70 hour weeks anymore, I can get a little more done (whew) test03B.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Forwood Posted August 16, 2007 Share Posted August 16, 2007 Wow! Excellent! Top splining and beautifully animated. It is so good that I don't really want to criticize anything... but couldn't help noticing a CP or two, on his posterior, that might benefit from some weight adjustment. Would you mind revealing what the patch count is for this guy? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arkaos Posted August 16, 2007 Author Share Posted August 16, 2007 Thanks, Paul . That means a lot coming from you . The total patch count is 4931. I am aware of the posterior, thanks. I created a smartskin to correct most of the bad stuff, but I figure I can correct the rest in muscle-mode when I get the core animating done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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