I"m not sure if I qualify for the '"real artist" part, but here goes:
You face looks great just not very feminine, but everyone knows some female that looks like this, but if you want a womanly women here are my suggestions:
feminine faces should be smoother and more rounded at the corners
tilt the eyes in a little more
exagerate the upper lid some
make the lips fuller
Here is a quick sketch to illustrate my tips, it's not realistic like yours but you get the idea: