A little Animation I Made for the 11Second Club¡¡¡

[Jaff]

Hi you there,,, For the first time I´ve participated on the 11SecondClub and made a little animation with one of my characters that plays like a witness on court , I hope you like it, and please any comments are welcome , opinions, critiques, jokes, but don´t be so bad jaja, well here it is.......

November_Wip.mov

[Paul Forwood]

Bravo!

 

Beautifully done, Jaff. It all looks very good. Models, staging, animating, lighting. The only, very small, nitpic I have is that I would have prefered to see him emphasize the words, "nitwits" and "conducted". Also, if you can fix the texture on the shirt sleeves it will help lift the, otherwise excellent, presentation. One more very small point is the texture on the back wall. It looks as if it has been stretched along the X-axis slightly, but this may just be that the texture map needs some tweaking in PS to get it to tile seamlessly.

 

OUTSTANDING! Some of the best A:M work that I have seen in a long time.

 

Good luck with the voting.

[Rodney]

Ever since I first saw your character in the image in your signature I've been looking forward to seeing more. You haven't disappointed.

 

Very nice. You've got some very nice emphasis points going on in his gesturing.

I'd make some nitpicky suggestions there but I think you've already got a really good thing going.

[Paul Forwood]

Yeah. I take back any nit-picking. This piece is just great!

[nino banano]

Hi Jaff...very well done... I agree with Paul and Rodney ....good luck in the contest...send my regards to all there...see you

[HomeSlice]

That's awesome. How many hours did it take you?

[Jaff]

Thank you for the comments guys , and i´ll take care of every little opinion on way to improve .. the animation took me about 8 hours working , maybe 10.

and the fact is that there´re some animations on the contest so amazing ¡¡, but that´s good to make us grow to the next level , I really recommend to enter the CLub and have a little animating fun ...... , Saludos a Todos¡¡¡....

[Dagooos]

You do good work!

[Gerry]

REally excellent but Paul had one good comment about hitting "nitwits" and "conducted" with stronger gestures. But on the other hand I understand why he crossed it all out. This is great work, very fluid and believable!

[Jaff]

Thank´s guys , and I´ll take that comment , to put more hit on strongest words.... this is why I like to post.... the feedback, very important.

Cheers -

[Paul Forwood]

I went and voted.

Phew! That had to be done in several sessions, because there are about 100 entries to view, but at least the process is easy. The ability to see all of the entries together, after completing the voting, is good and makes it easy to revise the score awarded to each entry.

 

The competition is very strong! There are some very funny interpretations and one in particular which is downright cinematic but your entry still came joint third in my vote results.

 

Humour is usually worth at least one more point on the score card. "Leave 'em laughing..."

[Jaff]

Thanks Paul, I know is a strong competition, I´ll take care of adding more detail and humor next time , something that make them go to bathroom jajaja,