Hey Noah,
First of all I wanted to chime in and say like everyone else that I really enjoyed it. Technically, it really is quite an amazing achievement and you should be proud!
Now, how about some critical comments? I know when I finish something I like to hear how I can improve.
For the most part, almost all of the animation looks like gaming animation. This is probably partly due to the fact that it's almost all high intensity action and you were certainly striving to get this thing done so it didn't drag out forever.
What made it seem to me like what I'm calling "gaming" animation is the stiffness of most of the movements. So in the future you would want to work with your arcs and easing, and follow through and so on.
A good example is the girl running toward you on the catwalk - her movements are extremely stiff.
However, this didn't take away from my enjoyment of your film - it's completely cool
And I realize your intent was probably not to set the world on fire with character animation skill, but to get the movie done as a whole - and again, it's a great accomplishment.
Your models, as ever, are stunning.
Hope to see more in the future!
Tom