glenn Posted May 21, 2009 Share Posted May 21, 2009 Hi Guy's This is my attempt at an entry for Pass the ball, but I think I've got a bit carried away (20 seconds worth). My question is, is it too long to be included, or, should I start the clip just before the ball enters the frame? Glenn PTB_Shadow.mov Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NancyGormezano Posted May 21, 2009 Share Posted May 21, 2009 hee hee - This is a tough one - to shorten or not - as the characters preliminary actions have the viewer wondering what's going on, so that the eventual outcome is a BIG surprise. Made me laugh. You could "purty up" the setting some. Or add some other elements to the scene? maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSpleen Posted May 21, 2009 Share Posted May 21, 2009 I liked it but....The ball needs to come from frame left I believe so all entries fit together? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwhitaker Posted May 21, 2009 Share Posted May 21, 2009 [excellent, sad and funny nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glenn Posted May 22, 2009 Author Share Posted May 22, 2009 Thanks Nancy I'm glad you got the joke, I was a bit worried it was to subtle. You could "purty up" the setting some. Or add some other elements to the scene? maybe? I maybe should add a nail brush to the scene, if your familiar with the Morph character from the 70's you'll know why. Morph appeared on U.K. television in a program called "Vision on", he was a fore runner to Walace and Gromit, and he had a pet nail brush! Glenn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paul Forwood Posted May 22, 2009 Share Posted May 22, 2009 Ha! I like the ending! Morph was the British equivalent of Gumby. I don't know which came first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nino banano Posted May 23, 2009 Share Posted May 23, 2009 ha ha nice entry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
phatso Posted May 25, 2009 Share Posted May 25, 2009 2 cents (pence?) worth: Tighten it up by about 30% until the ball falls, leave the timing intact after that. Morph looks like he's moving in slo mo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glenn Posted May 25, 2009 Author Share Posted May 25, 2009 2 cents (pence?) worth: Tighten it up by about 30% until the ball falls, leave the timing intact after that. Morph looks like he's moving in slo mo. I concur, I thought there was something not quite right with that bit, just couldn't put my finger on it. Ta Glenn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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