glenn Posted May 21, 2009 Posted May 21, 2009 Hi Guy's This is my attempt at an entry for Pass the ball, but I think I've got a bit carried away (20 seconds worth). My question is, is it too long to be included, or, should I start the clip just before the ball enters the frame? Glenn PTB_Shadow.mov
NancyGormezano Posted May 21, 2009 Posted May 21, 2009 hee hee - This is a tough one - to shorten or not - as the characters preliminary actions have the viewer wondering what's going on, so that the eventual outcome is a BIG surprise. Made me laugh. You could "purty up" the setting some. Or add some other elements to the scene? maybe?
TheSpleen Posted May 21, 2009 Posted May 21, 2009 I liked it but....The ball needs to come from frame left I believe so all entries fit together?
glenn Posted May 22, 2009 Author Posted May 22, 2009 Thanks Nancy I'm glad you got the joke, I was a bit worried it was to subtle. You could "purty up" the setting some. Or add some other elements to the scene? maybe? I maybe should add a nail brush to the scene, if your familiar with the Morph character from the 70's you'll know why. Morph appeared on U.K. television in a program called "Vision on", he was a fore runner to Walace and Gromit, and he had a pet nail brush! Glenn
Paul Forwood Posted May 22, 2009 Posted May 22, 2009 Ha! I like the ending! Morph was the British equivalent of Gumby. I don't know which came first.
phatso Posted May 25, 2009 Posted May 25, 2009 2 cents (pence?) worth: Tighten it up by about 30% until the ball falls, leave the timing intact after that. Morph looks like he's moving in slo mo.
glenn Posted May 25, 2009 Author Posted May 25, 2009 2 cents (pence?) worth: Tighten it up by about 30% until the ball falls, leave the timing intact after that. Morph looks like he's moving in slo mo. I concur, I thought there was something not quite right with that bit, just couldn't put my finger on it. Ta Glenn
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