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10 Second Animation - Critiques welcome!


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Hi Nat,

 

Thanks for sharing your work. I like the simplicity of your piece and the nice colors. The only thing that I'd like to see is some hair movement to lessen the stiffness of the animation.

 

Good job :)

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Thanks for the comments guys! And I agree that some secondary motion in the hair would add a lot, I was just being lazy. =) Ken, I would love to be involved in the Two project, and looked at it pretty extensively the other night, but wasn't sure I'd have time to complete all of the bootcamp excersizes in a timely manner. Any chance I can "transfer a few credits" with example animation like this one? Let me know and I'll hop on board. I actually work in the same city as Hash Inc, and as the local community isn't so strong am anxious to get involved online.

 

Nat

 

Oh, almost forgot to answer the question of how I did in the contest. Alas! I had some last minute trouble converting my file into the proper format and missed the deadline, though my spot was finished. Oh well, I'll be entering next month's as well. Thanks again and keep the crits' coming!

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Not a darn thing wrong with this unless you count the right fingers sunk into her chest when her arms are folded. Extremely minor in my book (mesh in mesh is my middle name) because of the exceptional animation that eclipses it. I can't imagine you would have to go through boot camp to be accepted as a TWO animator if you show your 10 second "demo".

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