jamagica Posted April 30, 2005 Posted April 30, 2005 Better than what I can do...if you soften the whole pic a bit, the result will look a bit better Quote
pixelmech Posted April 30, 2005 Posted April 30, 2005 Nothing wrong with that Dan - some good modeling too. The tip of the airplane dips into the table. The lighting needs work, but that is literally the toughest thing to do. Read up on some stuff in the radiosity forum. Quote
Kamikaze Posted April 30, 2005 Posted April 30, 2005 Dan, Nice so far...Is that coffee in the cup? you might want a little reflection in the coffee.(specularity too?).but its a personal choice....and the shaddows are hard but if thats whats what your wanting then its just right......I find most thing so subjective..it all depends on what your going for, nothings set in stone.....not with 3D anyway.... some may disagree...LOL Keep up the good work and I look forward to more.. Michael Quote
nyahkitty Posted April 30, 2005 Posted April 30, 2005 What material are you using for the table? I've been looking for a decent brushed metal look. Quote
rago Posted May 3, 2005 Posted May 3, 2005 The image is not that bad, but with a few minor adjustments it could look a lot better: For example why don't you bend some of the angles of the paper and add some bump to it, in real life paper is never so rigid. Add some noise to the table and walls so that they look less computer cg. The coffee cup's handle is to big, and the cup is over all to thin, for reference look at some Illy coffee cup. Make the light less harsh and increment the shaddow resolution. Try these few changes and compare with your first image, and then let me know!!! Bye. Quote
Xtaz Posted May 3, 2005 Posted May 3, 2005 Hi Dan ... I woul try to change proportions ... i believe it isnt correct ... Quote
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