DavidDenzill Posted January 18, 2014 Share Posted January 18, 2014 Lots of fun to make. AM is awesome. Any feedback appreciated. (edit) added some basic lighting and made less colourful. Might get around texturing properly someday. A variation of the first. David Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Rodney Posted January 18, 2014 Admin Share Posted January 18, 2014 Made me laugh. Especially at the end. Nicely done! If you are already up and running like this you are well on your way to very good things. I don't know if you are looking for any specific type of feedback. If you are, just suggest a point of interest and and I'll be glad to explore and elaborate. As you asked for feedback I want to satisfy your request. Keep in mind that this is only opinion... take or leave as you see fit. A few things off the top of my head: - Nice music and sound effects. Very impressive actually. It all worked very well with the animation. Very good sync as well. - Entertaining. With every viewing I enjoyed the skit better and notice new details. - A few very nice poses in there. Can I recall a few from memory? Yeah... I think I can. The barber... as he motions to his seat. ... the guy getting his hair cut as he sits and then reacts. Those are the two that spring to mind easily. - Nice variety of props! You set the stage/environment well. On the 'room for improvement' side: (things you no doubt know already) Color. The wide variety of different colors were a bit distracting (making it hard to focus on any one thing) Certainly not a show stopper and I assume this was intentional. Lighting. If you were to light this short really well... it'd be all the more impressive. I don't know your experience with lighting so I won't delve too deeply here. Texturing. There wasn't much texturing to be seen. Obviously these were not a focus for this skit but boy am I looking forward to when you master them! when you do will be a serious force to be reckoned with! Very well done. From someone who is just learning the ropes what can be said except.... color me impressed! More please!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DavidDenzill Posted January 18, 2014 Author Share Posted January 18, 2014 Made me laugh. Especially at the end. Nicely done! If you are already up and running like this you are well on your way to very good things. I don't know if you are looking for any specific type of feedback. If you are, just suggest a point of interest and and I'll be glad to explore and elaborate. As you asked for feedback I want to satisfy your request. Keep in mind that this is only opinion... take or leave as you see fit. A few things off the top of my head: - Nice music and sound effects. Very impressive actually. It all worked very well with the animation. Very good sync as well. - Entertaining. With every viewing I enjoyed the skit better and notice new details. - A few very nice poses in there. Can I recall a few from memory? Yeah... I think I can. The barber... as he motions to his seat. ... the guy getting his hair cut as he sits and then reacts. Those are the two that spring to mind easily. - Nice variety of props! You set the stage/environment well. On the 'room for improvement' side: (things you no doubt know already) Color. The wide variety of different colors were a bit distracting (making it hard to focus on any one thing) Certainly not a show stopper and I assume this was intentional. Lighting. If you were to light this short really well... it'd be all the more impressive. I don't know your experience with lighting so I won't delve too deeply here. Texturing. There wasn't much texturing to be seen. Obviously these were not a focus for this skit but boy am I looking forward to when you master them! when you do will be a serious force to be reckoned with! Very well done. From someone who is just learning the ropes what can be said except.... color me impressed! More please!!! Thanks Rodney. I take everything you said on board. I did not spend much time on texturing or lighting. Will look at adding more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted January 18, 2014 Hash Fellow Share Posted January 18, 2014 That's a fine first project! Lotta hair! The camera angle at about 1:03 confused me it, looked like the saw was stuck in his hair but it was really in the wall behind him. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DavidDenzill Posted January 19, 2014 Author Share Posted January 19, 2014 That's a fine first project! Lotta hair! The camera angle at about 1:03 confused me it, looked like the saw was stuck in his hair but it was really in the wall behind him. Thanks Rob, you are correct. I will fix that along with adding lighting and texturing. By the way thanks for all your tuts scattered in the forums, a wealth of info. You are a very good teacher. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DavidDenzill Posted January 29, 2014 Author Share Posted January 29, 2014 Updated short with the suggestions made. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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