gra4mac Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 I wanted to try out Emilio's sweeper plugin and one thing led to another... Thom is so willing. I had fun doing this and would like to polish it up, so any suggestions are welcome. I use the On2 codec as usual. Thom goes rolerblading! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starwarsguy Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 the only thing i could say is that the water at the end is a little shaky, but i understand that water's hrad to animate so not too big of a problem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PlJack Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 Crit: His speed should slow down suddenly as he hits the water. /Crit Looks like you put a lot of work into that one. Very nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
modernhorse Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 Hey that's very cool ! Nice job so far on this. A minor crit or two if I may - 1) I think that its obvious that its water that he lands in. But perhaps you could make it more transparent? 2) I would make a bigger and deeper pool. It seems that the pool is too shallow and that he is surely hitting his head on that bottom. Yowza! 3) Next add some sound. This piece deserves sound. Hope you keep going with this one. Good idea. Doug Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starwarsguy Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 ModernHorse, I don't understand why some people are walking around with wierd names like you're UnMaster. How'd you get that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gra4mac Posted September 4, 2004 Author Share Posted September 4, 2004 Thanks for the comments, every bit is helpful. The water is one of the things I want to work on. I'd like to make it a pond with some wash and splash. Slowing down as he enters the water would add a good bit of realism. Sound is also a good idea, I just need some music to go splat by. I also want to work on the setting a bit and add soem treez and hills, and a warning sign with a double black diamond. Any other idaes? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted September 4, 2004 Share Posted September 4, 2004 To add to everyone else's comments, making the camera roll as it is going through the loops would look better. Thom disappears as though you went into a first person view and if that is the case Thom would be on his head at the top of the loop. Seeing the ground plane roll up to the top of the screen as though he's upside down would look cool. Great job so far. Keep at it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChrisThom Posted September 4, 2004 Share Posted September 4, 2004 I liked it. I'm curious how you modeled the track. Also, maybe you could say that he's landing in a big pool of blueberry Jello Then it would look perfect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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