Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted March 14, 2011 Hash Fellow Share Posted March 14, 2011 See the finished BUS STOP movie Original layout: 2nd revision: 3rd take: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NancyGormezano Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 terrific - love it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Rodney Posted March 14, 2011 Admin Share Posted March 14, 2011 Classy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meowx Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 Cool! Is that just something you did for fun, or were you going to use it to promote the film? If the latter, I might suggest putting "...is twenty of them." above the "SEE" lines. It reads a little awkward right now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted March 14, 2011 Author Hash Fellow Share Posted March 14, 2011 Cool! Is that just something you did for fun, or were you going to use it to promote the film? If the latter, I might suggest putting "...is twenty of them." above the "SEE" lines. It reads a little awkward right now. OK, I changed it, but if this version doesn't pack 'em in you'll never work in this town again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meowx Posted March 14, 2011 Share Posted March 14, 2011 Hahaha. Much better now! Although looking at it now, I'd almost say it would be a lot cleaner without the "SEE" stuff at all. But it would also have less to draw people in. I'm torn! Perhaps just a shorter line like, "Princesses and astronauts, love and romance, treachery and betrayal... and much, much more!" thinking> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted March 15, 2011 Author Hash Fellow Share Posted March 15, 2011 Hahaha. Much better now! Although looking at it now, I'd almost say it would be a lot cleaner without the "SEE" stuff at all. But it would also have less to draw people in. I'm torn! Perhaps just a shorter line like, "Princesses and astronauts, love and romance, treachery and betrayal... and much, much more!" thinking> "SEE" is an essential part of the bad movie poster form. It cannot be omitted . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtaz Posted March 15, 2011 Share Posted March 15, 2011 I'm sad to not be part of this the poster is amazing Robert... as is usual in your work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted March 15, 2011 Author Hash Fellow Share Posted March 15, 2011 I'm sad to not be part of this the poster is amazing Robert... as is usual in your work. Don't worry. 2011 and another forum project are just around the corner! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NancyGormezano Posted March 15, 2011 Share Posted March 15, 2011 Now wait just a minute here, I didn't get any reefers, as was clearly promised in the contract I signed in order to participate. Did someone get more than their fairshare? hmmm ??? I like the original poster composition better. Perhaps moving the black text "...is twenty of them" to right below the "there are a million stories", and changing text to "Here are twenty of them" and then moving all those delicious, enticing SEE teasers back up to where they were originally, might work? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted March 15, 2011 Author Hash Fellow Share Posted March 15, 2011 Take 3... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NancyGormezano Posted March 15, 2011 Share Posted March 15, 2011 I like this better. What bothers me now more, is the raggy edges on the lettering on the Bus stop sign. It is inconsistent with the rest of the sign. Either the red raggy edges could be cleaned up or the rest of the sign could be grunged by making the white and red surrounds look rusty, or paint chipped as well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted March 16, 2011 Author Hash Fellow Share Posted March 16, 2011 You'll have to speak to the sign manufacturer about his non-uniformly weathering ink. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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