Paintstrippin Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 what up homies! i guess this fits under the newbie genre ... my first animation just a short animation i did for a independent study of animation, thanks to AM i gots me some good grades! http://s589.photobucket.com/albums/ss336/p...=Sequence01.flv lemme know what you think! and if any one wants to use or modify my model i can hook you up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Rodney Posted May 18, 2009 Admin Share Posted May 18, 2009 Nice! For a first animation... simply awesome! You've got some really smooth motion in there. Is any of that motion capture? Yes, I'd love to get a closer look at your model. From what I can see it's very cool. More than getting access to the model though I'd love to see more animated action with these guys from you! You said 'Lemme know what you think so here goes. I'm sure you already know this... A little more time on the texturing and lighting would really do wonders for this scenario. It wouldn't have to be too crazy an adjustment to take it where it needs to go. My suggestion would be to avoid colors that are 100% pure. The blue background is a good example of where a little variation in the color would work well for you. Whether that was my first or that was my 50th I'd be really happy with that if I were you. More please! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paintstrippin Posted May 18, 2009 Author Share Posted May 18, 2009 Oh the blue back ground was to make the school's logo -the yellow "CTC @ TECH" on blue is their logo... i attached the .prj everything i used is in it i hope... i used several files to make the whole animation and then just edited the shots together so the entire choreography wont be in it... Be warned i work really sloppily and some of my slop doesn't work at all! rw0rproject2.prj Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Rodney Posted May 18, 2009 Admin Share Posted May 18, 2009 Thanks! I've taken a brief look so far and I like what you've done with him. Too much fun. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Walter Baker Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 Oh ya tool cool for a first, beat the heck out of mine. Great job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted May 18, 2009 Hash Fellow Share Posted May 18, 2009 Welcome to A:M! That looks like a very successful first outing. My main crit would be that some of the camera angles were confusing and/or moving too much. But again, a very respectable first effort. May you have many more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alano Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 I agree with Robcat, the weak staging made your impressive character animation suffer. I particularly liked the walk and would have liked to see a bit more of it. I would like to see our hero struggle a little more with the lever. I have a feeling you could have done a very nice job with that bit of business. All-in-all, an outstanding effort. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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