Distress Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 I made this portfolio for a class, which required 3 original shorts, each around 5 seconds long. I'm still learning about modeling, rigging and animation, so I appreciate any comments and constructive criticism on how I can improve. Hope you enjoy. (I know I could improve lots on animating the last clip, but I had to rush it) Pstage.mov downtown1.mov piano1.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_black_mage Posted June 16, 2007 Share Posted June 16, 2007 the downtown one lacks in comparison with the other 2, why? cause the cars turn weird...make the tires turn or something and make the limo turning smoother. the piano one is very good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AniMattor Posted June 17, 2007 Share Posted June 17, 2007 I like the dude on the stage. He's simple, but appealing. I'd do some more with him. Good start! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Distress Posted June 20, 2007 Author Share Posted June 20, 2007 the downtown one lacks in comparison with the other 2, why? cause the cars turn weird...make the tires turn or something and make the limo turning smoother. Yeah, I knew something was off but I never thought of rotating the tires, for some reason. I'm glad you like the stage character, AniMattor. I was originally making him for a claymation short a long while ago, but decided to convert him to 3d. Thanks for your comments!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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