jfirestine Posted December 28, 2003 Posted December 28, 2003 Here is a character I just started. Hope to post more later. Your thoughts? Quote
Dearmad Posted December 28, 2003 Posted December 28, 2003 Looking pretty nice. Only conceptual quibble I would have is a personal choice one: I like longer fingers when a figure is spindly like that. You planning on adding some geometry to the shirt or is skin-tight the order of the day on this one? Where you going with this one? Got a story/scene planned already? Quote
Zaryin Posted December 28, 2003 Posted December 28, 2003 I agree. I think the fingers could be little longer. Other than that, this is a nice start. Quote
littleandy Posted December 28, 2003 Posted December 28, 2003 Haha, looks a little malnourished! :lol: Seriously, looks good. Kind of anime proportions, it seems... I agree with the others though: fingers should be longer. And personally, it seems like the legs could be closer together. Not to encourage a lot of staring at that region on people, but I don't think there's quite as much space between the thighs... ;) Anyway, I can't wait for the head... that'll tie it all together better... well, unless you're going for a headless character... hmm... well, then it could use some blood, maybe. Oh, I'm up too late again! -Andrew Quote
Mike Lium Posted December 28, 2003 Posted December 28, 2003 Great potential I think,and the patch count looks very low so that you have a ton of options if/when you decide to animate. Looking forward to updates :) Quote
jfirestine Posted December 29, 2003 Author Posted December 29, 2003 Thanks for all your input. I am making some revisions now... Hope to post them soon! I don't have a story for this character. I was just going to use it for some animation tests and character design concept for my demo reel. Thanks again for all the input. Quote
jfirestine Posted December 30, 2003 Author Posted December 30, 2003 Here is another test render with some revisions from other forum users. Comments are always welcome! :D Quote
Zaryin Posted December 30, 2003 Posted December 30, 2003 It's looking good. If you want it to pop you should add and extra ring of splines where the shirt meets the flesh, and then pullit out. This will make it look more like the shirt is a seperate piece. I would still lengthen the fingers. Quote
zandoriastudios Posted December 30, 2003 Posted December 30, 2003 I would shorten the torso and make either the shins longer or the thighs shorter, so that the leg proportions are more natural. The modeling looks good, I just think that your proportions need some adjustment.... Quote
littleandy Posted December 30, 2003 Posted December 30, 2003 I agree, unless you are going for a sort of "Olive Oil" type character, which would be fun too. Depends, I guess on whether you are shooting for realism or cartoony- At this point I'd guess you're going for cartoony, so if that's the final goal, then I've got no complaints. :rolleyes: -Andrew Quote
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