Aragorn23 Posted December 26, 2004 Share Posted December 26, 2004 well this is the first thing i've posted. just want to see what people think of how i did this excersize. excersize4_It__s_a_Pitch.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aragorn23 Posted December 26, 2004 Author Share Posted December 26, 2004 I was playing around with the toon render and i got this: excersize4_It__s_a_PitchToon.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Rodney Posted December 26, 2004 Admin Share Posted December 26, 2004 Looks like you nailed it. For this exercise I usually suggest the camera be offset just a little. It's hard to 'read' the action coming from a straight on angle. Here are some examples (from long ago) that show how other people dealt with the silohuetting of the actor to get the action to read better. Ball Pitch and Bat Swing (Animation Contest Examples) Example only. Not trying to suggest you turn your test into a movie here. I definitely like the toon look. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaryin Posted December 27, 2004 Share Posted December 27, 2004 I agree. It looks good, but the angle could be better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aragorn23 Posted December 27, 2004 Author Share Posted December 27, 2004 thanks for the feedback, i'm glad i'im doing good. here's another render i did with various options on (just wanted to try the different options out lol) and a new camera angle. ...now i'm going to go start "the door's stuck" (completion time six hours!) i hope that one turns out good too... excersize4_It__s_a_PitchNew.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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