thanks for your expertise, it's so good to get feed back, it know the story, but to get it across, where its understandable is key importance., so it's good to have eyes at both end.
maybe if I put the camera back on witch Lena ( after the cat tells the banshee to go, )seeing witch Lena, as she yells at the banshee to get her book, in a close shot then puling out to show the whole scene including witch and banshee . thanks Rodney