My first dialogue with expressions

[Sharky]

Hi guys!

 

I post my first dialogue with expression,what will be in my Aikido Basics project!

I mind about it, that I have some mistake!

 

Please check it and write me your opinions!

 

Dialogue

 

This movie is rendered REAL_Time, not final,and low-quality!

It is required Divx 5.03!

 

I'm waiting your opinion!

 

Sharky

[CreativeAustinYankee]

Sharky,

 

This shows quite a bit of promise, the body language seems right, though it's hard to be sure because I don't speak the spoken language. There are times, like where he spreads his arms, that the motion seems a bit robotic, go into the graph editor and give those areas abit more ease in/ease out.

 

I'm sorry, but at this resolution, it's just not possible to offer tips on lip-sync. I recommend creating a second clip of this with just the head of the character, make the head fill the screen. At the current resolution, it's a bit difficult to really read the character's face.

 

Add a blink between his first and second blinks, possibly where he leans forward. Add another blink between his second and third blinks.

 

The first brow furrow is good but try strengthening it a little.

 

Oh, you might get a better response for this if you post it in the WIP forum.

 

Anyway, it looks like it just needs some fine-tuning.

 

Just my two cents,

 

Steve P.

[Sharky]

Hi Steve!

 

I thank your opinion!

I promise you, that I will repair my mistakes,but I'm making a new version,what I do by tutorial!

 

Thanks, again!

 

Sharky!

[Rodney]

Sharky,

 

Looks good from here.

 

My only suggestion:

Why not have him start from a different pose than arms stretched out (like most model poses).

 

Other than that good job!

 

DIVX may be a problem for many people though.....