Tunames Posted September 26, 2008 Share Posted September 26, 2008 This is gonna be my entry for this months 11 second club..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted September 26, 2008 Hash Fellow Share Posted September 26, 2008 The confessional is a clever premise! When you render that find a way to make the middle wall more obvious, I didn't catch it until the 3rd view. the drink inthe middle is a fun bit, but it's happening awfully fast. Since they can't see each other, what good does the hand gesturing do them? Too many straight up poses still, I think. What if that priest were leaning his chair back against that middle wall like he was being real lazy at the start, not expecting anyting surprising. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunames Posted September 30, 2008 Author Share Posted September 30, 2008 Thanks Robcat! I unfortunatly run out of time so I submitted what I had. I agree the drink is a bit fast but I was trying to fill in a long gap in audio. On gesturing in the dark it's been my observation that even when unseen most people "talk" with their hands. Ever watch someone talk on the phone? But thinking back on it I should have exaggerated his relaxed or bored pose to make his surprised pose even bigger. Thats what this competition is for to learn and I'm doing a lot of that with comments like these...thanks again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HomeSlice Posted September 30, 2008 Share Posted September 30, 2008 Very nice Tunames. Too bad you ran out of time, Robcat's suggestions were really good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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