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Cool character Eric!

Nice little animation too.

 

A little crit or two (assuming you are still looking for such things). I missed a lot of your WIP.

 

1) He seems a little stiff, I think mainly in the legs(?). I might have to watch Toucan's walking and in flight to be sure so... dunno.

2) The feathers seem a bit too hairy. (When in doubt I'd try to simply them more)

3) Its not immediately apparent that he has a helmet and microphone on his head. The outline of it blends in a bit too well with his head? Perhaps a slight color/texture change would help highlight that too. The audience figures it out soon enough of course! ;)

 

Quite an impressive group of characters you are creating. (I thought your frog was going to win the image contest!)

Can't wait to see the adventures this group is going to go on.

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Rodney - don't mind the crits at all, that is the only way to get better - you ask a non 3D person and you get a "that look great" answer... you post in the forum and you get useful crits (the truth) ;-)

 

I was hoping to win with the "heroes" with the frog too, but it's hard to beat a modeler as good as Eric Campden.

 

-E

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