Sharky Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 Hi Guys, I practiced the principles of animation,and ask you please write me your critiques! What is that I have to fix? Cheers, Sharky rhino.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nimblepix Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 Sharky, Nice job! The fingers could use some tweaks. They jump around and don't express his power. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nunsofamerica Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 Good Job, like nimble said. The fingers are to blocky, also. Try to work on the walk. He is to fast to be putting that much weight down in every step. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nicknite Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 Hello Sharky, I think your animation is really good! I have always wanted to make my own character but I can never think of anything to make. Keep up the good work! I hope to see more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dhar Posted January 11, 2007 Share Posted January 11, 2007 Not bad Sharky. Not bad at all. You've got all the basic movements down with follow throughs and what nots. Where I would tweak things a bit would be in the jump. The follow through seems to come a bit too late and seem disjointed. I'd smooth that out where the torsoe would come down faster then slowly settle in the final squat position. I would also put a hold on the pointing when saying "Hey you", and also when saying "who are you?". The way they are now they seem to float away to fast to emphasize what he's saying. Keep up the good work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sharky Posted January 11, 2007 Author Share Posted January 11, 2007 Thanks Guys, I will try to fix my mistakes! Hello Sharky, I think your animation is really good! I have always wanted to make my own character but I can never think of anything to make. Keep up the good work! I hope to see more smile.gif Check thi out,here is a link: http://www.hash.com/forums/index.php?showt...=rhino&st=0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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