Rhino

[Sharky]

Hi Guys,

 

I practiced the principles of animation,and ask you please write me your critiques!

 

What is that I have to fix?

 

Cheers,

 

Sharky

rhino.mov

[nimblepix]

Sharky,

 

Nice job!

The fingers could use some tweaks.

They jump around and don't express his power.

[Nunsofamerica]

Good Job, like nimble said. The fingers are to blocky, also. Try to work on the walk. He is to fast to be putting that much weight down in every step.

[nicknite]

Hello Sharky,

 

I think your animation is really good! I have always wanted to make my own character but I can never think of anything

to make. Keep up the good work! I hope to see more

[Dhar]

Not bad Sharky. Not bad at all. You've got all the basic movements down with follow throughs and what nots.

 

Where I would tweak things a bit would be in the jump. The follow through seems to come a bit too late and seem disjointed. I'd smooth that out where the torsoe would come down faster then slowly settle in the final squat position.

 

I would also put a hold on the pointing when saying "Hey you", and also when saying "who are you?". The way they are now they seem to float away to fast to emphasize what he's saying.

 

Keep up the good work.

[Sharky]

Thanks Guys,

 

I will try to fix my mistakes!

 

 

Hello Sharky,

 

I think your animation is really good! I have always wanted to make my own character but I can never think of anything

to make. Keep up the good work! I hope to see more smile.gif

 

Check thi out,here is a link:

 

http://www.hash.com/forums/index.php?showt...=rhino&st=0