DeltaCommando5 Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 Hey guys, check this out. I made this teaser trailer for my Star Wars fan film, Star Wars Frontlines. What ya think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MattWBradbury Posted November 29, 2006 Share Posted November 29, 2006 You might want to move this to either the Showcase forum, or the WIP forum. The scene is pretty good; unfortuantly, I cannot make out much in the way of details during most of the video because it is too dark. I have some suggestions on how to improve the visual quality: The scenes gamma is far too low. Increase the gamma so that more details like stars, planets, and ships can be made out better. The stars in Star Wars are usually incredibly bright, and very numerous. Try increasing the size of the stars, as well as try to increase their number. When ships come out of hyperspace, you should make a lense flare of some sort to show the effect better. All of your ships seemed to come out of hyperspace at the same time. Try making them come out at different times. The animation seemed a bit too long. You might want to make the ships move a little faster accross their path. Around second 25, the camera makes a rouch path movement change. You might want to take a look at the camera movement and rotation splines to make sure they arn't peaked. Hopefully this helps Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dhar Posted November 30, 2006 Share Posted November 30, 2006 I think that looks really good. I agree with Matt about the darkness. It's amazing how much sound adds to a clip. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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