Star Wars Frontlines

[DeltaCommando5]

Hey guys, check this out. I made this teaser trailer for my Star Wars fan film, Star Wars Frontlines. What ya think?

[MattWBradbury]

You might want to move this to either the Showcase forum, or the WIP forum.

 

The scene is pretty good; unfortuantly, I cannot make out much in the way of details during most of the video because it is too dark.

 

I have some suggestions on how to improve the visual quality:

• The scenes gamma is far too low. Increase the gamma so that more details like stars, planets, and ships can be made out better.
  
• The stars in Star Wars are usually incredibly bright, and very numerous. Try increasing the size of the stars, as well as try to increase their number.
  
• When ships come out of hyperspace, you should make a lense flare of some sort to show the effect better.
  
• All of your ships seemed to come out of hyperspace at the same time. Try making them come out at different times.
  
• The animation seemed a bit too long. You might want to make the ships move a little faster accross their path.
  
• Around second 25, the camera makes a rouch path movement change. You might want to take a look at the camera movement and rotation splines to make sure they arn't peaked.
  

Hopefully this helps

[Dhar]

I think that looks really good. I agree with Matt about the darkness. It's amazing how much sound adds to a clip.