dude Posted September 15, 2006 Share Posted September 15, 2006 I've just realized how much I've improved since I first got animation:master. heres my firs head :[attachmentid=20562] Heres my second:[attachmentid=20560] And last (what this WIP is about) my latest head:[attachmentid=20559] [attachmentid=20564] Anyway, just lookin for comment on how to improve my latest head. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admin Rodney Posted September 15, 2006 Admin Share Posted September 15, 2006 Definitely showing some advancement there. Whats neat though is that you can see the talent (and even your personal style I think) in all of your efforts. Looking forward to seeing your work in a couple more years! Keep up the great work. Your efforts are definitely paying off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trajcedrv Posted September 15, 2006 Share Posted September 15, 2006 You are on the right track! MORE! MORE! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dborruso Posted September 15, 2006 Share Posted September 15, 2006 WOW you improved a lot! It looks nice. Keep going man! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dude Posted September 15, 2006 Author Share Posted September 15, 2006 Thanks guys! Heres my head so far: [attachmentid=20594] I started on the neck and changed and smoothed out the face. I think his nose is a little too big.... hmmm.... I might change that later. Anyway anyone have any ideas for improvement? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
always_a_kid Posted September 15, 2006 Share Posted September 15, 2006 Holy Guacamole! You have improved tremendously! Wow! I am amazed! Seriously, I hope you keep up with all of this because with your rate of improvement you will be able to do some pretty amazing stuff in the future. Wow! That's so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so cool (I got tired of typing "so," but there would be a lot more if I hadn't). That is so cool Whiz/dude, keep it up. I can't wait to see more. -Always Oh...suggestions...I was so mesmerized by the tremendous improvement that you have made that I didn't see that part of the post. Well there are some spots that could be smoothed down just a tad bit more...it looks like there is a little bump on the cheek but I'm not really sure...but other than that, it is amazing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_black_mage Posted September 16, 2006 Share Posted September 16, 2006 this is on a personal level but...that is a big nose....but the whole thing (other than the nose) is awsem!!!! but i like the other head more, what age were you going for again? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mouseman Posted September 17, 2006 Share Posted September 17, 2006 I kind of like the large nose. It could use some tweaks. But most people try to model people with ideal proportions (or exaggerated proportions, ahem); I think it's refreshing to see more realistic people being modelled. One suggestion, maybe or maybe not helpful ... generally, there is a line or crease from the side of the nose to the far corners of the mouth. You seem to achieve this effect by having diagonal corners of 4-sided patches lower than the opposite diagonals; the patch effectively gets folded diagonally. This looks okay for a still character, but when you want to create a smile pose for the character, the lines should become sharper than what you can get by this technique. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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