tripod information

[cuboos]

i made thees pics for the movie to help explain the tripod thought you guys might be interested

 

here is tripod info

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and heres info about the heatray

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[case]

hmmmm loooks like you got bored well anyway cool keep it up man

[oakchas]

Pic #1

no one else not "no one ells"

 

attempted not "tempted" (or could be "has been tempted")

 

Pic #2

steam gun not "steem gun"

 

Pic #3

no spelling errors... (no words!)

 

Pic #4

Deactivated not "Deactavated"

 

Pic #5

Activated not "Actavated"

 

Pic #6

Attack not "Atack"

 

Pic #7

Too much to edit, grammar and spelling.

 

Sorry,

 

Spelling and grammar are important if you are going to use text to explain things.

[Woloshyniuk]

besides the spelling, it looks not too bad so far. Is this thing supposed to be as big as the ones from war of the worlds or are they human sized?

[cuboos]

just as big as the ones in war of the worlds

[Jeetman]

Cuboos,

 

Excellent job in defining your character! It's details like this that let you know what your character can and cannot do. However I have to agree with Oakchas.

 

You need to use a spell check and really proof read your text before presenting it. It's more enjoyable to read and is more professional that way.

 

Other than that though, it's really starting to shape up my friend.

 

Jeetman