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He has a great look to him and the colours are fab.

 

I agree with Nancy on the observations of the soles; they look too small for the shoes. The hands look natural and not ‘constructed’ and the shirt poking out from the jacket is nice and flouncy :) I’d perhaps make the trousers not dip in at the end of the torso and let them lead pretty much straight to the knees (which I think should be raised a bit as the shins look too short).

 

I’d definitely make sure every hair isn’t perpendicular to the head and straight - that always suggests ‘unnatural’ to me.

 

I hope that helps and doesn’t annoy,

 

Steve.

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He looks great! You've a style of your own and I think you've improved on your last character. I'd say the shoes look abit too egg shaped and perfect. Also I agree with the comments above.

I love the volumetric spotlight he's in! God I love volumetrics!!!Every light should have one! :D He seems like a magician on stage.

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also wondering how he's going to blink?

 

He does have eyelids but I haven't done pose sliders yet.

 

I agree with Nancy on the observations of the soles; they look too small for the shoes.

 

Yes, these are his third pair of shoes - all quite different - and I've not been happy with any of them. Obviously things don't look right on these which is good to know so I can adjust things. Oh, and Steven - you haven't annoyed at all. Everything you said was helpful and I'm greatful that people like you take the time to look at work and offer advice :D

 

He looks great! You've a style of your own and I think you've improved on your last character.

 

Thanks Ken. Well, as long as I don't get worse then I think I'm doing okay. :D

 

Thanks Steve392 for your comments also.

 

 

Dale.

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