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That looks real nice ,good textures its got a warm feel to it for me .I like the baby ,looks like it realy is drinking that milk ,nice job

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I like your image a lot Carlos. Your characters are fun and your props are very well done. I saw your rocking chair on your site, i think it is a beautiful piece.

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You have sent the image to steve@hash.com haven't you? He's taking the entries so posting here is not actually entering.

 

Not sure if you want it critiqued but I will add my 2 cents worth (I am no expert so it is just personal opinion)

 

1. The ball looks like it is floating a small distance above the ground.

2. Except for the baby everything is facing the same direction - out to the front right of the image.

3. Too much 'twinning'.

a. The dogs ears and stance

b. The parents legs and feet

c. The babies legs

4. I would have preferred that the camera view place the back wall (and thus blackboard) on an angle rather than sqaure on (or almost square on)

5. Most of the main elements appear to be competing with each other for attention

 

I love the textures that you have used, the warm feeling and the modelling appears great with one small exception - the parents upper eyelids seem to be pulled out like shades.

 

Cheers

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I sent to steven my work ,thank for you construtive opinion is very good for the next works for my.

The greater virtue of the teachers is humility

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