"Professional" image

[c-wheeler]

This is one of a series I am doing for a client, my first in AM but I have been 2d for years. I would like to mske this a more "pro" pic, so any advice anyone is able to give etc. would be gratefully recieved

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

http://home.btconnect.com/FatclownFilms/

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[Xtaz]

Hi ...

 

Since this is a professional illustration, I would try something photo realistic ...

Forget the property toon, and work more the illumination and the reflection.

This backdrop is very good, I liked!!

 

keep the good job

 

cheers

Xtaz

[adamjames]

This looks like the tip of an electric fencing foil to me (I'm quite an avid fencer).

 

I would agree with Xtaz.....forget toon and go for relaism.

 

Adam

[mootsger]

I work for a hospital equipment planning company (for now) and am constantly looking at medical supplies. Most of the time they have a simliar layout.

I'd like to see it rendered on a flat relfective surface without the background material, which may also lower your render time. You can apply the logo flat-on with photoshop.

Maybe do a radiosity render with a high d.o.f.

Good start none the less.

[zacktaich]

I'd work on the glass settings (I assume it's glass). and add a little bit of wear in your texturing, so it looks more realistic.

 

Looks like good work nonetheless

[c-wheeler]

AdamJames- Yes it is. It's the new LeonPaul GTFoilPoint. and the illustration will go on advertising material. I got this job because they saw this stuff on the web -

 

http://home.btconnect.com/FatclownFilms/foil_page.html

 

all illustrations were done in AM

 

Zacktaitch it was meanr to be transparent plastic, but I think you are right

 

mootsger I assume you mean like a plain sheet. I will try that

 

XTaz, I will try for more reflection in the stainless steel and add some grunge.

If anyone is interested I will post the lighting setup.

 

Thanks all for the advice

Chris Wheeler