All in One office machine

[pixelplucker]

I still need to smart skin Thom and maybe slow up his picking up of coffee cup. My audio is also kind of crappy. Other comments?

allin1.mov

[alano]

Thom's walk was a little "runway" for an office setting, but the characters waiting in line were quite good though some of the stretching could be slower. People in line like that have got plenty of time. I really liked the variety of poses you had for the Thom's in line. It looked like the coffee in the pot was anticipating the drop rather than reacting to it.

 

All-in-all a fun piece.

[robcat2075]

That's a cute clip!

 

 

I like the "waiting in line" actions.

 

The

long line of identical Thoms

is like something from 1920's expressionism. You should rent "The Crowd" (1928).

 

 

The walk is a bit hurried. It makes me wonder if

that all-in-one office machine is also the only toilet.

 

There could probably be a more obvious moment where

he pauses to discover the line, THEN turns to walk to the end.

 

 

But I enjoyed that!

 

 

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[pixelplucker]

I definitely need to slow down the beginning and make it more like an everyday casual routine that the first character goes through.

The drip does seem off too, thanks for the extra eyes on this.