thejobe Posted August 6, 2006 Posted August 6, 2006 just felt like making something while i had some free time this weekend some of the stuff is from the extras CD everything else was made by me Quote
Admin Rodney Posted August 6, 2006 Admin Posted August 6, 2006 just felt like making something while i had some free time this weekend Glad to see you're making good use of your free time. Forgive me if I don't show my wife as it'll remind her that I need to throw away a lot of 'stuff'. ...and YES everything I have is needed thank you very much! I know this isn't a WIP but I'll add this: It would be nice to see the scene with some more texture... dirt, dust, grime etc. but that's just me. The lighting experts could weigh in on that aspect too. The composition (from camera POV) could use a minor adjustment to really finish the image. Cropping the image to balance the top and bottom a bit more would accomplish this too. The empty space at the bottom doesn't contribute to the theme of the image; "garbage", so could be removed. But... 'Garbage' tells the tale as is. I like. Quote
thejobe Posted August 6, 2006 Author Posted August 6, 2006 i made a few fixes not sure if its what you were thinging but heres what i added grim to the brick walls grim and dirt to the ground white parking lines built a dumpster added grim to the dumpster repostion camera angle and resized it to lessen empty space Quote
Admin Rodney Posted August 6, 2006 Admin Posted August 6, 2006 Starting to really get the look of being a world that is lived in. If you don't put in some concrete curb barriers you might want to dent up the lamp post. I'd imagine someone would have hit that many a time being in the parking space like that. It reminds me of the time I was in Japan... backing into a parking spot and found out designers do indeed place huge posts and poles in parking spots. The pole was really really huge and yet somehow it had been hit many times before. Umm.. and it was my wife's car. Great improvements! Quote
thejobe Posted August 7, 2006 Author Posted August 7, 2006 these were the models i made for that scene everyhing else was from the cd Quote
oakchas Posted August 10, 2006 Posted August 10, 2006 Kinda reminds me of the music video from Money for Nothin' Enjoy Dire Straits! Quote
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