Heya man,
This shot looks *fabulous.* The lack of lipsync is a tad weird, but I assume that's going to be a task for a second pass. The body motion is good.
Three crits:
1) Monk's head snaps for a moment -- is she spitting in his face? It's a strange motion without any kind of anicipation or secondary action.
2) Her wrist, in the very first frame of the first shot, looks broken. (I've broken both of mine, one twice, so I know.) I noticed it in the last video you uploaded, but I forgot to post it.
3) The motion is a bit floaty.
Now, on the last crit I think I should clarify what I mean by floaty.
Watch The Incredibles tonight. The characters move at a pretty normal pace, but even when they're going slowly there's a visible snap from pose to pose. I think it comes from extra passes and adding keyframes to extend spaces between movements. This might be something that'd really benefit this clip, as the motions themselves are great for the most part (Monk's head thing not withstanding), but they feel like they last too long. However, if you speed up the motions they'd look strange, so you'd need to maybe go back with a second pass and add dirt to the keyframe timeline.
Does that make any sense?
Anyway, how about uploading a full thing of all the clips seamed together now? It's looking really good. Keep it up!