gazzamataz Posted July 9, 2004 Share Posted July 9, 2004 Some of you have probably seen this before but I decided to finish/polish it up somewhat - boy am I rusty!!! Anyway 'ave a butchers and tell me what you think, its only the first part there are two more to follow. Needs Quicktime 6 BTW. Rexiewake.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iham Wrong Posted July 11, 2004 Share Posted July 11, 2004 Any kind of animation we can make still seems pretty amazing to me. What else do you want to hear? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreativeAustinYankee Posted July 11, 2004 Share Posted July 11, 2004 I hope the dino's a pet or you're gonna need a new avatar. The walk seems "off" somehow, like maybe the feet are slipping? My two cents. Steve P. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted July 12, 2004 Hash Fellow Share Posted July 12, 2004 Perhaps a more cinematic treatment... Long Shot: GreenGuy sees dinosaur Close Up: GreenGuy's reaction of disgust and beginning to walk Long Shot: GreenGuy walking up to dinosaur. Doing everything in long shot can leave the audience looking around the frame at something other than the detail you want them to notice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZachBG Posted July 12, 2004 Share Posted July 12, 2004 My only comment is that without pupils, it's tough to read the emotions. Of course, that is presumably something that wouldn't be a problem in final render. That, and yes, the feet are slipping. It also looks like he's on a treadmill when he arrives at the dinosaur--like he doesn't have any farther to go, but keeps walking anyway; which, though it's a feeling I often have before my first cup of tea in the morning, might not be what you're looking for. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gazzamataz Posted July 17, 2004 Author Share Posted July 17, 2004 Right, thanks for the comments guys - I appreciate them all. It was a bit unfair of me not to have sent the whole of the flick cos this new version shows the camera zooming in. It's still a bit stiff. One thing I am striving for is to make my motions as fluid as possible. Yes, as much as I tried, he still looks like he is skidding. But the main object of this flick was to get back into animating since I have now dreamt up a storyboard for a quick 'Bella Bear' show reel which I am gonna start right away. So I won't be doing anymore to this flick yet, well, maybe Anyway enjoy! As usual all comments appreciated. Rexiewake3.mov Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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