kwhitaker Posted June 21, 2009 Posted June 21, 2009 Thought I show how witch Lena's creation went with her banshee Mark Skodacek created the material for the witch brew your thoughts and comment are well come A_WITCH.S_BREW.mp4 Quote
steve392 Posted June 21, 2009 Posted June 21, 2009 Oh hell that looks scary ,I like the way that skelleton comes out .Looking very good Quote
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted June 21, 2009 Hash Fellow Posted June 21, 2009 Nice scene. There should be a way to make the book pages not so rigid when she's turning them. Those snails should fall faster. Plop! Quote
kwhitaker Posted June 21, 2009 Author Posted June 21, 2009 There should be a way to make the book pages not so rigid when she's turning them. Those snails should fall faster. Plop! I'm redoing Lena Turing the pages with a bend in the page.. thanks for noticing robcat I'll post the new renders Quote
kwhitaker Posted June 22, 2009 Author Posted June 22, 2009 There should be a way to make the book pages not so rigid when she's turning them. Those snails should fall faster. Plop! robcat here is the newly rendered scenes, thanks again for pointing the out, Quote
steve392 Posted June 22, 2009 Posted June 22, 2009 Looks good especially the pages .Roberts got eyes like an hawk Quote
kwhitaker Posted June 23, 2009 Author Posted June 23, 2009 it's good to have eyes like an hawk letting you know when you mess up thanks guys Quote
frosteternal Posted June 29, 2009 Posted June 29, 2009 Nice page turns, maybe just a bit more "plop" of those snails? Who is she talking to? Herself? I suppose witches, being solitary would be self-talkers... OR....can this scene, as it is mostly explanatory, be condensed? Suggested dialogue - "I need no oracle to tell ME what to do" "The ancient book of shadows has the spell I need" (fairy squeaks in protest) "Yes, this will do quite nicely..." "If I follow the spell precisely - I'll finish with rotting entrails, pinch of newt, a handful of snails!" "Foulest of humours, boiling and hissing form vaporous tendrils, a ghostly apparition!" Short, succinct, to the point. And it seems more a chant than a monologue. This is all coming along so well! Quote
kwhitaker Posted June 30, 2009 Author Posted June 30, 2009 OR....can this scene, as it is mostly explanatory, be condensed? Suggested dialogue - I really like how you trimmed down script. so much so that I started re-placing the voice track ,and I like it so much better I'm redoing a couple of the animation I had a hard time converting this page to the movie.as you saw. the voice part was done, a few years back., so making changes is difficult. this is the original script from the book . actually Lena is talking to Grim her familiar . I really appreciate the time it took. I'll post the movie part as soon as its done again thanks so much Jessie Quote
kwhitaker Posted July 1, 2009 Author Posted July 1, 2009 OR....can this scene, as it is mostly explanatory, be condensed? Suggested dialogue - I really like how you trimmed down script. so much so that I started re-placing the voice track ,and I like it so much better I'm redoing a couple of the animation I had a hard time converting this page to the movie.as you saw. the voice part was done, a few years back., so making changes is difficult. this is the original script from the book . actually Lena is talking to Grim her familiar . I really appreciate the time it took. I'll post the movie part as soon as its done again thanks so much Jessie Hum the picture did not show up, i'll post it with the improved part Quote
frosteternal Posted July 1, 2009 Posted July 1, 2009 thanks so much Jessie You're very welcome, Kat. Quote
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