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Nice!

For a first animation... simply awesome! :)

 

You've got some really smooth motion in there.

Is any of that motion capture?

 

Yes, I'd love to get a closer look at your model. From what I can see it's very cool.

 

More than getting access to the model though I'd love to see more animated action with these guys from you!

 

You said 'Lemme know what you think so here goes.

I'm sure you already know this...

 

A little more time on the texturing and lighting would really do wonders for this scenario. It wouldn't have to be too crazy an adjustment to take it where it needs to go. My suggestion would be to avoid colors that are 100% pure. The blue background is a good example of where a little variation in the color would work well for you.

 

Whether that was my first or that was my 50th I'd be really happy with that if I were you.

 

More please!

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Oh the blue back ground was to make the school's logo -the yellow "CTC @ TECH" on blue is their logo...

 

i attached the .prj everything i used is in it i hope... i used several files to make the whole animation and then just edited the shots together so the entire choreography wont be in it...

 

Be warned i work really sloppily and some of my slop doesn't work at all!

rw0rproject2.prj

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Welcome to A:M! That looks like a very successful first outing.

 

My main crit would be that some of the camera angles were confusing and/or moving too much.

 

But again, a very respectable first effort. May you have many more!

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I agree with Robcat, the weak staging made your impressive character animation suffer. I particularly liked the walk and would have liked to see a bit more of it. I would like to see our hero struggle a little more with the lever. I have a feeling you could have done a very nice job with that bit of business. All-in-all, an outstanding effort.

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