Haikalle Posted February 4, 2004 Share Posted February 4, 2004 Hello Everyone. First I want say thanks to all people who share their knowledge on this forum and helps dumb likes me to learn everyday something about animation:master. Here is newest model. she is almost good, but she needs more character. Tell how to add. I will add some animate ...but I don't know when because I hate to read school books too : ( http://www.riihikoski.net/~kalle/kuva2.htm Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drakkheim Posted February 4, 2004 Share Posted February 4, 2004 Very Nice! I really like the outfit. as for adding more character the only thing i can think of is a different haircut. Keep at it, cannot wait to see her move. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JohnArtbox Posted February 4, 2004 Share Posted February 4, 2004 solder=soldier? hard to criticise the model, she looks great. If she's to be a soldier she needs some props(a gun, helmet etc) to communicate it. And I'd maybe change the shoes to something more functional. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haikalle Posted February 4, 2004 Author Share Posted February 4, 2004 Sorry...Soldier and you are right ...shoes looks too strange . I will fix it to next version. Thanks guys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ross Smith Posted February 5, 2004 Share Posted February 5, 2004 Impressive modeling! Very nice job with that. Her garment is a little visually confusing, though. It looks like the surface of steel, but appears to bend and move like cloth. Is this part of her character? If you're going for more metallic armor, I would make its curves "firmer", or if you're going for more of a robe, maybe change the surface properties. That's my only crit, though. Keep going! By the way, I know how it feels to 3D in school's shadow. Just hang in there, and you'll find the time to keep working somehow. (My model is taking me months, but he's getting there, a few hours a week at a time.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hash Fellow robcat2075 Posted February 5, 2004 Hash Fellow Share Posted February 5, 2004 i think the proportions aren't quite right. Are the arms and legs too short or is the torso too long? great concept, great details. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zacktaich Posted February 5, 2004 Share Posted February 5, 2004 Her eyelids should go a bit lower so that she doesn't look so frightened. looks great! Zackt. P.S. In order to look at your site with a google translator on I need to know what language it's in. Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haikalle Posted February 6, 2004 Author Share Posted February 6, 2004 There is new version of my SOLDIER... so check it out. fixed things -shoes are diffrent. -better hair -arms and legs are little longer -eyes fixed( it still like little frightened http://www.riihikoski.net/~kalle/kuva2.htm Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zacktaich Posted February 6, 2004 Share Posted February 6, 2004 That new one is much better, really great work. I grabbed just a random picture of a man in a relaxed face pose, you'll see that eyes are squinted a lot more than people expect: http://www.ualberta.ca/~uaca/images/joe.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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