Road Runner (head)

[Korken]

Hi all!

 

This is my begining for the Road Runner in Coyote & Road Runner.

I need crits on the shape of the head. Or if you like it just say so.

 

In time will I add more pics of progress.

 

//Korken

[Korken]

Back..

 

//Korken

[jon]

his head does seem to flatten out a little abruptly.

 

could that be his hairstyle?

 

-jon

[Korken]

I'm not sure what you mean but if you've see the original model, it has like a stretched dome (?) as a head.

 

//Korken

[rossk]

So far its looking pretty good. Just a couple crits--

1. The slant of the forehead points straight into the air on your model while in profile pictures of the roadrunner, the forehead is... well its hard to describe, so here a picture is--

 

2. The bottom bill of the roadrunner is also somewhat different than your model shows... I've been trying to think of a way to describe it accurately... but cartoon anatomy is not my specialty so here is a pic again--

 

Anyways, it looks like with just a few small tweaks you'll have a very nice start to your model.

 

Cheers,

--Ross K.

[Korken]

Thx for the pics! I had only memories to go on.

I'll begin with the bill at once.

 

//Korken