william20 Posted May 15, 2005 Share Posted May 15, 2005 This is my toon female wip to go along with the corpse that I modeled. Comments always welcome.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apprentice Posted May 15, 2005 Share Posted May 15, 2005 Oh hey...a nice female model there... My personal preference would be if the overal hair has umm...easier, smoother flow line, I mean not too stiffy if you know what I mean, and the middle hair roots on her for head could be tweaked more so it will look less like 3d mesh planted on her head and more like hair. Other than that...hubba hubba... . Good work william20. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
william20 Posted May 15, 2005 Author Share Posted May 15, 2005 Yep, I would agree about the hair. I put it on very fast, and now I need to go back and groom her. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kamikaze Posted May 15, 2005 Share Posted May 15, 2005 Looks really good.....guess it will be OK to agree about the hair, maybe a few more highlights, strands drawn in....You know what ?, Id like to see this character animated when the new cloth sim is ready, I really like the static flow of her outfit and bet it would look nice animated in clothsim, simcloth that is.... Keep it going, Michael Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jon Posted May 16, 2005 Share Posted May 16, 2005 good work! the first thing that strikes me here is the lack of contrast overall... but since she's playing with the dead, maybe it's supposed to be a little gloomy ' ' ) -jon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epoch Posted May 16, 2005 Share Posted May 16, 2005 Hey it's coming along nicely Only critique I can offer are of two: 1: already mentioned.. the hair seems to extrude from the center as if it were a moehawk that grew long. seems bald on the sides, I don't know if that is what you were going for or not, would be neat and different style though! 2: I don't know if it's the perspective throwing me off but her calfs/shin area seems too short and maybe stubby...maybe pull them and make a little bit longer? Could I see a frontal cam shot? great work so far - I look forward to seeing more of this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaryin Posted May 16, 2005 Share Posted May 16, 2005 It's looking really nice so far. I agree that the hair could come down on the forehead a little. Other than that, it's good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
william20 Posted May 17, 2005 Author Share Posted May 17, 2005 Very appreciated feed back everyone. Thank you. I am making some changes and then I will post them. William Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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