Fist action

[camzilla]

Ok, I'm doing a scene where the kat walks up to the beach and see's that his make shift house has been washed away. You'll notice that I haven't done any work on his facial expressions but I'm wanting advice on the movement. Is the motion big enough? Also, do you think everything is timed right for realism and comic relief? Thanks for any C&C.

 

Here's the link

 

http://www.camzilla.net/animation/practice.avi

[JTalbotski]

You've got some nice poses, but they flow kind of robotically and too quickly. There could be some pauses to show certain poses better which would clarify his emotions better also.

 

I don't really animate, so take all this with a grain of salt,

Jim

[camzilla]

You've got some nice poses, but they flow kind of robotically and too quickly. There could be some pauses to show certain poses better which would clarify his emotions better also.

 

I don't really animate, so take all this with a grain of salt,

Jim

Thanks for the help Jim. Those are the kind of things I am trying to smooth out to make it more believable. I'll work them in and I'll post the results.