I see. I like the concept a lot, and I am anxious to see more.
If, however, I may make a small suggestion/critique...
Have you considered recording real people acting out your scenes, and then creating your actions based on the timing/movements from the recording. I say this because it makes such a huge difference having them move a bit more realistically. A lot of the characters movements/actions are choppy or fast, and because our eyes are so used to seeing humanoids move, our brains automatically zero in on humanoid character moving in ways they should not. I think if you tried you would absolutely LOVE the difference it would make.
I am making a short film in A:M myself, and the difference was night and day timing out actions in my head versus creating them based on actual human movements.