I performed tweaks using the submitted suggestions. Here'ss the “final” version; however, I question the length (32 seconds). I ask the group for its opinion. Please bear in mind this would open a company's demo reel and be used as an opener for a commercial directing reel. It is not geared toward getting a job with a company as an animator, if that has any sway on the comments & critiques.
I’m still building the effects track.
Here's the link:
http://home.pacbell.net/jedonald/AM/Sentinel2.mov
It’s a QuickTime file 32 seconds, 4 Megs.