kwhitaker Posted September 9, 2008 Share Posted September 9, 2008 This week I did a lot of redo's on the last segment adding, stars and a few other things, which I'll post after I add voice and music. .But this next part is where, demon, witch, and wizard do their thing. My oldest daughter Johnnie Cash, plays the heck out of Witch Lena. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martin Posted September 16, 2008 Share Posted September 16, 2008 This is your movie, Katt, and for heaven's sake, I've got my own movie directing to do, but as directors-in-arms, I've got to make a few suggestions: 1) Separate the lines of dialog - they run into each other. 2) Do some establishing shots, (your other clips usually showed where the action was taking place but not this one.) 3) These are all medium shots - try some closeups and wide shots. 4) When the dialog changes pitch, it is misleading if the same person is talking - perhaps you shouldn't do that except when the effect is truly needed. I watch every one of these clips, and I'm enjoying your progress. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kwhitaker Posted September 16, 2008 Author Share Posted September 16, 2008 This is your movie, Katt, and for heaven's sake, I've got my own movie directing to do, but as directors-in-arms, I've got to make a few suggestions: 1) Separate the lines of dialog - they run into each other. 2) Do some establishing shots, (your other clips usually showed where the action was taking place but not this one.) 3) These are all medium shots - try some closeups and wide shots. 4) When the dialog changes pitch, it is misleading if the same person is talking - perhaps you shouldn't do that except when the effect is truly needed. I watch every one of these clips, and I'm enjoying your progress. I appreciate you taking the time, your professional suggestion are very important to me. I'll be making more changes. thank you for watching Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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