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This week I did a lot of redo's on the last segment adding, stars and a few other things, which I'll post after I add voice and music. .But this next part is where, demon, witch, and wizard do their thing. My oldest daughter Johnnie Cash, plays the heck out of Witch Lena. :)

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This is your movie, Katt, and for heaven's sake, I've got my own movie directing to do, but as directors-in-arms, I've got to make a few suggestions:

 

1) Separate the lines of dialog - they run into each other.

2) Do some establishing shots, (your other clips usually showed where the action was taking place but not this one.)

3) These are all medium shots - try some closeups and wide shots.

4) When the dialog changes pitch, it is misleading if the same person is talking - perhaps you shouldn't do that except when the effect is truly needed.

 

I watch every one of these clips, and I'm enjoying your progress.

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This is your movie, Katt, and for heaven's sake, I've got my own movie directing to do, but as directors-in-arms, I've got to make a few suggestions:

 

1) Separate the lines of dialog - they run into each other.

2) Do some establishing shots, (your other clips usually showed where the action was taking place but not this one.)

3) These are all medium shots - try some closeups and wide shots.

4) When the dialog changes pitch, it is misleading if the same person is talking - perhaps you shouldn't do that except when the effect is truly needed.

 

I watch every one of these clips, and I'm enjoying your progress.

I appreciate you taking the time, your professional suggestion are very important to me. I'll be making more changes. :) thank you for watching

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