Grubber Posted November 9, 2003 Posted November 9, 2003 Made this animation day ago... Its very simple... Thought it's only my second attempt to animate something, so don't be cruel I'm going to make second part as well! I think it will be more complex!!! p.s. sorry if there are english mistakes! Quote
ZachBG Posted November 10, 2003 Posted November 10, 2003 Just curious, what's the length of this one, and what codec did you use? Is it possible to put up a smaller version? Your character looks evocative, but your site is very slow (I'm downloading the clip now at about .8K/second). (I feel your pain... once when I released a short film all the feedback I got at first was "Put it on a faster server!") Zach Quote
Troy Posted November 10, 2003 Posted November 10, 2003 When downloading, it says "Server Failure" Might wanna try getting a different host Quote
ZachBG Posted November 10, 2003 Posted November 10, 2003 Might wanna try getting a different host I agree... my attempt to D/L got to 60% and then... timed out. Zach Quote
Grubber Posted November 10, 2003 Author Posted November 10, 2003 my attempt to D/L got to 60% and then... timed out. Sorry about that... Try this! I put it on another server! Quote
jfirestine Posted November 11, 2003 Posted November 11, 2003 Nice idea! Funny! My only crit...... As he is running, you show a side view. The body appears to not tip forward. If a character is running, I like to see the body lean into the action. Also, body looks stiff, try having it bob a bit forward and back, possibly side to side. Just a suggestion. But, this is a very good start for only being your second attempt! I look forward to part 2,3,4.....etc.!!!! Keep up the good work! Quote
Grubber Posted November 11, 2003 Author Posted November 11, 2003 Thanks for Your critics I look forward to part 2,3,4.....etc.!!!! no, no, no... I'm going to make only part 2, maybe 3 Quote
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