Jump to content
Hash, Inc. Forums

Short and simple


Grubber

Recommended Posts

Just curious, what's the length of this one, and what codec did you use? Is it possible to put up a smaller version? Your character looks evocative, but your site is very slow (I'm downloading the clip now at about .8K/second).

 

(I feel your pain... once when I released a short film all the feedback I got at first was "Put it on a faster server!") :)

 

Zach

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Nice idea! Funny!

My only crit...... As he is running, you show a side view. The body appears to not tip forward. If a character is running, I like to see the body lean into the action. Also, body looks stiff, try having it bob a bit forward and back, possibly side to side. Just a suggestion. But, this is a very good start for only being your second attempt! I look forward to part 2,3,4.....etc.!!!!

Keep up the good work!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.
Note: Your post will require moderator approval before it will be visible.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

×
×
  • Create New...