Pengy Posted May 21, 2004 Share Posted May 21, 2004 Hello all: 1st time being able to post something in the showcase forum. Thanks to a ton of help from the great forum users You can check out the w.i.p. here http://www.hash.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=4673 Some great advice on how to get realistic looking glass. I used a mixture of materials and maps. Any crits or questions please ask. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zacktaich Posted May 21, 2004 Share Posted May 21, 2004 I really like the image. Great lighting and materials. Nearly photorealistic. Here are my suggestions, take 'em or leave them, what you've got is nearly perfect anyways. Composition: Something else on the table near the back, maybe show a little 'wall' that marks the back of the bar Move the smoke from the cigarette a bit, it seems runs into a white spot on the table The shotglass looks a bit small to me. May just be the position Materials: Make the edges of the cigarette box frayed a bit (maybe some white edges) Make the paper frayed, and yellow the color a bit. Maybe make the frayed edges black for the burnt look Great job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtpeak2 Posted May 21, 2004 Share Posted May 21, 2004 Hi, looks good but the shotglass looks a little thick at the rim. Maybe move the hat a little to the left too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pengy Posted May 22, 2004 Author Share Posted May 22, 2004 Hey guys thanks for the suggestions to answer a couple things, the shot glass I used for a reference is actually that thick in the rim it's part of the reason I picked it because along with the hawk outline on the side I thought it was quite unique. I positioned the derby the way I did to show the refraction in the JD bottle. As I said in the wip thread the scene is supposed to be in a lonely motel room but it seems I failed in getting that across. Thanks again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingSalami Posted May 27, 2004 Share Posted May 27, 2004 nice scene, the booze bottle seems stumpy to me... drugs, booze, and bowler hat, tough crowd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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