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J L Johnson

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  1. I'm going down the list of comments here and thinking I sure can't think of any constructive advice -- in fact WHO COULD after all this is Brian Prince then I come to Yves -- yep! the one person that could actually make some valuable suggestions --

     

    The whole scene is so photo-real that I smacked myself to make sure I was real. I like the last render the best, probably that left to right writing thing, but it sure flows better for me. Really excellent picture!

  2. Interesting link and the topic is illustrated very well by your movie.

     

    I think I'd try a solid background alternating between light and dark colors to get the flickering effect. You might vary the length that each color is displayed until you get the effect you're looking for.

  3. The texture of the skin looks fantastic. I would want to make his color a darker and maybe make his eyeballs an off color rather than just white, also I would probably made the spots on his head a bit darker and more pronounced, of course all of that would depend on just what you wanted his character to be like. The way he appears to me now is perhaps a bit mischievous but maybe misunderstood and forlorn. The suggestions I made here would make him appear more evil.

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