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I've had AM for sometime and decided to model a human as a way to improve my skills. I'm not completely happy with the proportions of the face and would appreciate comments from any real artists on the forum. I think she looks too masculine.

 

There are no decals on the skin, just procedurals. I planned on using the bump and diffuse procedurals as a base for the decals. I was curious if anyone had used this technique with success.

 

Rudimentary attempts to animate using pose sliders seemed to work really well, but I wasn't completely happy with the model and had to delete the poses. (that was a learning experience right there)

 

I modeled the body separately and plan on attaching later when the head is complete.

 

I'm not sure I understand how to post an image, so if no image shows with this message you understand why.

 

Thanks Bill Buffat

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Looks good from here. At a glance proportions seems to be correct.

Reminds me of an aunt of mine...

 

As far as posing an image goes:

 

Use the IMG button to paste the link to your image

This will place the picture in the post as opposed to placing a link there.

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I"m not sure if I qualify for the '"real artist" part, but here goes:

 

You face looks great just not very feminine, but everyone knows some female that looks like this, but if you want a womanly women here are my suggestions:

 

feminine faces should be smoother and more rounded at the corners

 

tilt the eyes in a little more

 

exagerate the upper lid some

 

make the lips fuller

 

Here is a quick sketch to illustrate my tips, it's not realistic like yours but you get the idea:

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