Cannabalistic Rabbits

[Teh_Demon]

Speaks for itself.

[phatso]

You are sick, you know that? Sick, sick, sick. Terminally warped.

 

Congratulations.

[robcat2075]

I guess by day 200 Shaggy and Thom had already been eaten.

 

The classic cannibalism on a lifeboat story: The Wreck of the Whaleship Essex

 

I'm surprised that sort of mishap didn't happen more often.

[Rodney]

I'm not sure if you are looking for suggestions here but... I'll offer them anyway.

If you are gonna do Cannabalistic Rabbits you might as well do them right.

Keep in mind that final decisions are always up to the artist.

Feel free to ignore.

 

Looking at your image I immediately become distracted by the word balloon and the horizon.

This takes my eye away from the image (which is what word balloons do) but isn't easy to read.

Level/straighten the words out so they are horizontal and it'll help your story 'read' better (literally!).

Then and consider the horizon. What to do with that?

 

How far would you like to take this image?

Looking for composition tips?

Lighting tips?

Just posting for the fun of it?

 

There is a story in there even if its only captured in one image.

I'd like to see you push this one to its limits. (Well, maybe not so much the cannabalistic part!)

 

Its your story... run with it!

[Teh_Demon]

Thinking about making a series, Like a new pic every day or something XD

[Teh_Demon]

Ya know, I'm thinking about making a new one every day, starting with Day 1 at sea, if you think this would be a good idea or not, give me some comment. I need some pointers here to. Just... CoMMET! XD

[robcat2075]

That's a disadvantageous angle to see them in that last pose. I'd show that "leaning over the edge" pose in profile or 3/4 to make it clearer.

 

edit: now that I look at it closely I see they're not looking over the edge. So something needs to be clearer there.

[Blackjack_Davie]

My only critique is that this is ANIMATION! master, not poser. . . hint hint. nudge nudge!

 

go for it man, I'm sure there's a site or two where you can download screams.

 

 

[tbenefi33]

In day 201 look like keekat drew the short straw..Keep up the good work.

[jon]

let's all wait while blackjack finds a new computer after throwing his last one out the "windows".

 

names are meaningless, do what you want demon... no matter how twisted or pointless to others.

 

tilt those windmills!

 

-jon