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Crits please, it's due Thursday.

 

I suppose this is more an animatic than a storyboard. However, it's not clear to me what the story is so in that sense it's not working yet (for me).

 

I think the advantage of a storyboard is that you can append little explanatory comments to cover what might have been ambiguous in the drawing. And... since it's static drawings no one expects you to have the timing perfected yet.

 

If the posing is important, I'd rethink the straight-into-the-camera poses. They're not presenting a clear silhouette to the audience.

 

one other thing... the ad for someone else's movie that shows up at the end may not be helping your pitch. ;) edit: the second time i watched it was an ad for some web thing.

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